Really nice Larry! I hope to make a similar trial like this. This is really challenging.
Great write

Great poem Larry! This is rather a strange form of poetry... but in a good way! I like the travel pose of this poem... it was so clear and well-written... and then the haiku was great!

And thanks I think I understand the form better now... I'll give it a try! ;)

Just as I comment on Khalids, I find where he found his idea from,

this is awesome Larry, a great combination that works well, it just shows how a haiku can say as much as a piece of prose.
It's also satisfying for those who enjoy writing prose as well as poetry,
(is there a senryu version? a piece of prose about life followed by a senryu)
As I like to have a play around with forms I will have to give this a shot myself.

Nice piece.