And oh, how my mind you can easily blow!
Are you sure you are only 9 ?? Sweetie you are born to write, the gradual picture of how a snow forms is just spot on. And the ending, WOW, just perfect.

I think I will call you "Little Poetess" :)

Keep it up!

Nice rhymes, and also nice flow.

I like the use of snow and how it grows more on the houses below as the wind blows, you did a good job and as well as to show the picture you wanted to show us.

5/5

The flow and rhyming is so good... I loved the picture of snow formation you draw here little girl... You are fantastic:)

Ooo what's this?....

I love snow, I see it as the worlds max factor (foundation) as it covers and hides all visible imperfections... Leaving everything beautiful and bright looking.

Anyway,

Reading your poem gave me a nice winter scene to imagine...
I also like the way you portray the slow layering of the snow too.

Very pretty write

"Little Miss A" :)
(Abbie/Amazing)

5/5

You really wrote this at 9 years of age?

I'm very impressed with your rhyme scheme. Your writing style is wonderful, quiet, and elegant just like snow falling.

Love this poem about snow
its a great write 5/5

This is a very beautiful piece, be proud of yourself and keep writing.

I liked this part in particular:

"Then I know
Snow
will quietly fall, grow
overnight higher than houses below
stop the stream in its flow"

Your poem flows like a stream 5/5

mandy :)

This is really amazing, loved how this rhymed and the pace it had.

Very well done, Abbie:)

5/5 Ingrid

Love the imagery and peaceful feeling in the poem

What a beautiful poem with an excellent rhyme scheme. Unforced and light. You gave me a feeling of peace. Thank you :)