Comments : The Invisible Man

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    This sounded like a story poem!

    I like the ending.

    Well done

    • 11 years ago

      by Blood of a Lion

      Thank you :) yeah this would end up being more like the prologue into the story, if you haven't seen the movie watch it and you'll understand this poem in the first three minutes of the movie.

  • 11 years ago

    by Max

    This is pretty nice story in your poem and yeah it reminded me of that movie you mentioned above
    it would be nice if you could go some longer with it haha but this is so fine to have
    I like the ending too

    good one =)

    • 11 years ago

      by Blood of a Lion

      Is that a challenge to make it longer? Haha... O___O

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I really loved your entry in the challenge, thanks again for participating! :)
    i really like what you done with it, interesting all the way through and very nice ending. Like i told u before, i haven't watched the movie, so i will definitely do that sometime soon! :)

    Fantastic write, Aaron! :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    Seen that movie that was sick in a werid way you know me though I like that & like this to 5/5 great job.