Comments : Feel

  • 10 years ago

    by Silent Scribbler

    Wunderfully penned; like art. Dark is definately the place for this work. Very nice piece.

  • 10 years ago

    by ah satan 666

    @.@!!

    Hello...
    This is one very deep dark piece.

    I had the single hit of a triangle chime in my head...

    As if it was the door bell, at my souls door!

    Nice tone,
    Well penned kiddo :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Though this poem is dark over the long haul I really enjoyed reading it after all

  • 9 years ago

    by Alanis

    It feeds mi soul, these words can't be explained but fill me up to an overdue overflow of words, amazing,

  • I like it, enjoyed reading it

  • 9 years ago

    by Jump from Life

    I loved it. Short, and sweet, but holding so much emotion and pain. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    Great piece! Well done..
    will surely read more frm u!

  • 8 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    I really enjoyed reading this poem!

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    Though this piece is short it's full of imagery, perfect rhyming and emotion. It's written beautifully too.

    Em

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Just lovely! So much imagery allowing some dreaming time-well done-

  • 3 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Nice imagery. Despite being an old write, it still holds up well.

    Take care.