You painted a sensual and blissful scenery with your words here Khalid... I really like how you took your thoughts and just let yourself go in this piece.... Very pretty piece...

Khalid....this is WOW by any standard!

it's no secret i love love poems but this is really freakin awesome, your word choice and flow is nothing but perfect in my opinion and you really set the scene and emotions throughout.

A great sense of freedom in this write, you really captivate the reader.

Great job, really amazing writing :-)