'Mirror mirror on the wall,
Can you see me at all'

Great beginning my favorite part of this piece
It also feels like you could be talking to your reflection or even someone who was very close. Good job

Thank you Bianca. I actually was talking about someoone close. My ex-girlfriend was the main focus of this poem. I did a lot of things for our relationship and she was completely oblivious to all the good we had. Its funny how we can be so inlove but yet so out of synch with each other. Thank you for your comment though :)