Just thoughts

Thank you...:)

Nice written i like it

"I'm so lost,
I don't know what to do?

I can't help it,
I fell in love with you.
They tell me it's wrong
that I shouldn't go along,
I should forget about you.

But you make me feel so alive
not despised.
You took my heart
and ran like hell.
So I continue to rebel
because we both fell."

^^Just an idea, I did change a few words and took a few out for flow purpose.
I'm not the best with form and kind of just make it up as I go and hope it works out. Punctuation is useful but not mandatory, I like using it because I feel like it helps get my point across.

Anyway, this poem is very relate-able, I've definitely been in this place quite a few time. It's short, but to the point. I like it.

Just something I felt and wrote down.... not a poem:)

would like any advice... on how to make it one:)