Comments : Love is never fair...

  • 7 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    That is so sad! I feel your throbbing pain. I'm going through the same thing, just to figure out WHAT HAPPENED!
    I love this poem!!!!

  • 7 years ago

    by NobodyKnowsItButMe

    How true, how honest!?!
    I've noticed some spelling errors (typos) in these lines: "His eyes dont (don't) have the same shine, now theyre (they're) just dull and heartless.." and "...shoulder, treat you
    like your (you're) worthless."
    But over all, good job!

  • 7 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Love is sacrifice of relief. A good friend, will always remain.