I like this, its straight to the point, punchy and so real.

Feel like this was from a movie or a game.

Good write

Really nice:)

I knew you would end up adding a part 3 eventually. :)

First stanza: The people who were searching for him finally found him. He kills them and then is kind of mocking them and is smug and asking if it's better that they found them while he smashes their head in with a bat. Gruesome imagery. I like the addition of "Better...I hope" it adds eeriness.

Second: This has fantastic imagery... the lit cigarette hanging from his lips and the smoke surrounding him, making him visible for a few seconds.

Now, it's really to the disturbing part... he murders a young boy for finding him. :/ Just plain evil.

Overall, I love this and am glad you continued. :)