Comments : I do

  • 13 years ago

    by Amreen

    Awwww.... So sweet and beautiful:)
    Perfect rhyming here and strong emotions displayed:)
    A suggestion: capitalize your Is
    Keep writing:)

    • 13 years ago

      by Trouble Child

      Thank you... Your comments will keep me writing. :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Marvellous

    The right answer repels regret. Slower it goes, longer it stays.

  • 13 years ago

    by Donnie

    Very tear jerking! I loved it

  • 13 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Awh this poem flows very beautifully my dear just beaufully! :) loved the WHOLE poem!!! 5/5

    Queen Ash

  • 13 years ago

    by Let It Be

    The rhyming drew me in and captured me. I can easily connect.