It flows beautifuly and the way that you changed subjects from fantasy to reality and then to something ending the cause and the effect very beautiful my dear friend! :) 5/5

Queen Ash

Not one of my favorites of yours, but I really liked the third line "veins drained, death sustained"

The title caught my eye and really added to the meaning of the poem as well!

You are a non stop writter,
its amazing because you have a consitent perfomance..