Comments : Why are all the bright Rainbows gone at Night

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Nana, This piece is really well written, there are some awesome lines within the piece and it felt slightly melancholic with some of the expressions, it seems to me that your thoughts are pondering on a subject that you cannot understand,
    The title seems a little long but that's just my opinion, it might work better shorter, maybe "why are all the rainbows gone?", once you read the poem you get the full question anyway, but again just my personal thought on it.

    Lovely piece, sweets
    x

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The last time I went on retreat on the way back home there was a rainbow in the sky.When the sunlight hits the natural prism formed by clear drops of rain we see a beauty connecting heaven to earth . Kind of like you sunshine
    Thank you for writing this
    Makes me think of a spiritual song from mercy me