Comments : White-out Heart

  • 7 years ago

    by Autumn Leaves

    This is a sweet poem, I like the title of this poem it fits perfectly with the content. I also feel like you are speaking to God I maybe wrong but this is what I conclude from reading your poem.

    The first lines makes me think about how the beautiful snow cover the dirt and how white is a symbol of purity, I just think that the way you worded this is great...I love it

  • 7 years ago

    by Adelle

    Like Autumn, I feel, this poem reads as having religious/spiritual connotations you say a lot without the need for many words. I believe this to be a skill possessed by those with a true gift for writing.

  • 7 years ago

    by Amreen

    This poem is lovely and has a profound meaning behind it.
    I have read your poem after a long time cayce and you still possess the same charm with your poems:)
    Keep writing:)

  • 7 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    This is a short but wonderful poem and speaks wonders to the readers heart, and is enjoyable to all. It speaks of the heart in a whole new way, speaking of the storm within and the raging emotions, feelings and loves.