Amazing one! I can visualize and think on what you wrote. Commendable!!

Like always your pieces are deep..the unbowed head makes me feel this is somehow connected to religion. It goes Alot deeper with sinking in smokey depths.
inherited metaphors shows us something about the subject of your poem too..a poet perhaps? There is alot of darkness to this piece too. Enjoyed reading my friend.

Superb!!!

Superb!!!

Superb!!!