It's so amazing, so real. well done...

This is simple and cute):-

Shorter poem, was that hard to write?:)
You did a good job with it Catty.

One thing, its better to write your Us you:)

This is really good. this is true pretty much everyone likes that one person for them being themselves . its also true that everyone likes a guy or girl who is sure of their decisions and their self.

It's hard to know what to talk about but if there is nothing to talk about then... There is no much relationship...

I could feel the frustration and also the wish to be able to speak to this person.

Wow very nice poem . I love it

Wow very nice poem . I love it

So powerful and expressive piece!! I can feel how much sad is your feelings. The word "U" was used almost ten times revealing how powerful is the effect of the beloved on you.
Great write

This poem is awsome... great job hunn