Beautiful 5/5.

Dark, deep, and yet beautiful! :D

Wow, this is a very remarkable poem, I enjoyed reading it a lot, great job, 100/100

There is a lot of darkness, there is also a lot of poem, potentially you could trim it back a touch and still have the same message loud and clear.

that said these two were awesome

' Chained to you, I live as an empty shell,
Unable to loosen your grip, choking.

You have killed my spirit, ended my drive
I am solely yours, a simple play thing.'

this says so much about how you felt and is very powerful.

just for these two this poem easily deserves a 5 from me.