Comments : Lost

  • 11 years ago

    by Kelwin lost in thought

    Very good but in the last line I believe u mean wrong :-) keyboard messed up again Hun :-) mine does the same thing. But very good :-)

  • 11 years ago

    by Natasha

    Yes. Indeed. This is very good.
    I enjoy reading short poem and
    with full of surprise like this! :D