Tonite
by onethuscome Jan 13, 2013
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In an open field of rich emptiness i watch day disrobe and adorn a star-woven gown to midnight bed....denied of shapes to silouette my shadow lies like a lonesome dream garnered in mimic obsession....chilled by winds provoke then motions cold jesture |
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11 years ago
by Hellon
Again a lovely piece that could be improved if the format was better....this would look lovely if centred IMO.
You have some great vocab going on here and...you have painted a lovely image in my mind...enjoyed it!-
11 years ago
by onethuscome
Thank you very kindly for your possitive feedback
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