LMAO!!!! oh my gosh this is sooo freaking funny!!!! my gosh why hasn't anyone commented on this poem yet? or nominated yet? lol i seriously love this poem!!! 5/5 i'm going to nominate it lo XP

Queen Ashlin

Was that supposed to be "Laugh." And wow im laughing really freaking hard over here.

Lol..... hahahahah.... Great piece ... I din expect this to turn out like this... hahhaaha.. Good one!

Lol.. I think is supposed to be laugh instead of lough... I am not sure what lough meant... but this made me laugh.. it definitively made me go huh?

5/5

Lol, Nice!

Like all good jokes, you did not drone on before the punch line. The length is good, the pace is good, and the mood change at the end is the best part. A man breaking the serious mood for a joke is common, and good for a laugh.

Hahahaha. This is just so freaking hilarious.