Very good Hun :-) 5/5

Thanks :)

I truly believe that everyone was once loved its how we deal that changes how we will love in the future. This poem is in my opinion a modern take on the classic heart break. I truly aprreciate it thank you for sharing

Thanks. But it was supose to be about like god once loved me but he forgot about me and and just left me to die

Read your poem.for all its pessimism the fact of expressing it implies hope and optimism.a purely dark outlook would just wallow in uncreative self-pity feeling sorry for herself which your poem does "not' suggest.your very name implies to me light and warmth and ur writing shows a poetess at heart.