Yes.
Yes.
Yes.
Yes.
Yes.
Yes.

I would care. You're so much stronger than I think you know.

I like how you start each stanza with "would you care" and add more questions.

The last line, you should take out the "so".

Yes.
Yes.
Yes.
Yes.
Yes.
Yes.

I would care. You're so much stronger than I think you know.

I like how you start each stanza with "would you care" and add more questions.

The last line, you should take out the "so".

Very good.. i know exactly what ya mean