Comments : Ecstasy (Part I)

  • 12 years ago

    by Autumn Leaves

    This poem is very sad, I guess if we could choose how we will utimately leave this earth we would want to go like this. I feel like you are expressing your pains and disappointments in this dark tale and sad and filled with emotions.

  • 12 years ago

    by Autumn Leaves

    This poem is very sad, I guess if we could choose how we will utimately leave this earth we would want to go like this. I feel like you are expressing your pains and disappointments in this dark tale and sad and filled with emotions.

    • 12 years ago

      by Rusheena

      Thanks for your comment, and you're exactly right. Ecstasy is very powerful and seductive, but it has its consequences.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jason Rainey

    I like it. I wanna feel that way sometimes. Very good job. Can't wait for part 2.

    • 12 years ago

      by Rusheena

      Thanks, Jason! It'll be up next week.

  • 12 years ago

    by East Poetry

    This poems derserves a 5/5 for sure.
    Drugs though, very scary! Master at destroying the flesh and mind. Drugs are the adversaries right hand man.

    • 12 years ago

      by Rusheena

      I was referring to spiritual drugs, but I totally agree. They're addictive but have devastating consequences. Thanks for commenting!

  • 12 years ago

    by Andrew Packard

    What are spiritual drugs? not sure what you mean. are they good or bad?

    • 12 years ago

      by Rusheena

      Haha, sorry, I should've clarified that. I didn't mean actual drugs. I meant things that defile the soul and make it corrupt, like drugs do to the body.

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    I loved the darkness in your poem. What a metaphor of injection with lithium!!! This must be inspiring. The ending with burning in the chest is unique.
    Great write.

    • 12 years ago

      by Rusheena

      Thanks for all of the feedback, Khalid; I really appreciate it!

  • 12 years ago

    by Unknown

    Very powerful metaphor of the drugs for the way you feel about your life, expressing the sadness and possibly the disappointments in yourself.

    Nicely done. :)

    • 12 years ago

      by Rusheena

      You're spot on. I usually just put my feelings on paper, but I wanted to try to write from different points of views, portraying what or who I feel like at the time. Thanks for commenting, Hannah. :)