Comments : What a walk!

  • 11 years ago

    by Marvellous

    The best that can happen, is find. The best treasure to find, is Truth. Indeed beautifully worded. Good to learn from you again, bro!

    • 11 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks brother, glad the Lord found me and had mercy and compassion on me seeing my condition as he does with many.

  • 11 years ago

    by Go Away Unless You Mean What You Say

    I really liked this poem, it could change lives, bring others closer to the faith, I bet God, Jesus and Mary are looking down on you and smiling.

    This poem left heart truly fuller

    • 11 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      You bet! I pray that the Lord will help you and your best friend!

      Ken

  • 8 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    The beginning is nice. I like the imagery and the journey you showed in your poem. Again, spacing is important here, and quotes should be on their own as a note. Try to rephrase quotes from the bible and relate them to you. Take a look at my "Missing piece found" and you'll understand what I mean.

    • 8 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks Zahra, I see what you mean with this poem and a few/many others and I am thinking of revising and entering them again, I think my Rose without thorns would be well received.

      Your friend Ken