Comments : Desperation

  • 11 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    Woman, you're a goddess.

  • 11 years ago

    by Love Hurts

    What a beautiful poem! Yet sad.

  • 11 years ago

    by Natasha

    "I could never really write."

    I caught myself staring at this line.
    Enchanting, addicting and interesting.
    Because it the end of this piece.
    But my opinion is it doesn't end there.
    Almost like a start to something else.
    This line made people wonder.
    Because it makes me wonder;

    Who doesn't?

    (P/S: I love this piece, Luna!! You're amazing.) :D

  • 11 years ago

    by xXx Eternal PainxXx

    Even my art gave up on me,
    disposed me, like a lump
    of petty poetry, finding triumph
    in walking me home to the
    bottom of a dust bin.

    ^^^ love the personification and it shows the raw pain very good poem!!! :) and don't worry poetry doesn't leave us it takes a break lol 5/5

    Queen Ashlin