Nice choice of words, great pace and precision. I enjoyed reading it very much!

Ares

I love this.. I don't know much else to say.

I love poems that use nature yet have a different meaning and purpose behind them.

The first stanza is my favorite, no doubt. Very poetic.

Tony, this piece is simple yet does the job on expressing the pain of loss and the emotional roller coaster we go on in life.

X

Perfect. I like the length of it because I was not lost in a sea of words. Good job.

You captured a great deal of sadness in this piece, I love the idea of being murdered by your emotions.

Lovely write.

This is a great poem! Wonderful choice of words and writing I loved it

I'm at a loss for words. The emotion in this was so loud in so few words. I felt like I was standing outside, cold, and the poem was a plot taking place.

Fantastic imagery.

Gud poem tony, bt d first half is much better than d other half..
I read uor earlier poems and i wasnt expecting dat u wud let d reader understand
D whole idea of u being murdered..so easily.
I mean d idea of u nt bein d same person anymore..

I loved this.. You are sooo talented; i'm jealous