Awh this poem makes me want to cry it's just that great to me!!!! hope i see your work more sweetie!!! great poem since it's your only poem right now! :) 5/5 out of me i love it!!! :)

Queen Ashlin

Gracias, Queen Amiga. You are kind. Paco

Hello,

free verse here. A melancholy poem about love lost. The sea used as a metaphor for it. The choice of format almost makes me feel the weight of emotion like the sea suffocating the air ways with rhythmic waves abusing them. How can you catch your breath when the waves come so soon? The sadness, loss and hopelessness is described so well that this reader can feel the pain of loosing love to another. Perhaps the worst way to loose love. At least in death it is final; you won't see them again. I would describe it as torture which is worse, is it not?

Well done and as I have read your other work posted on here. I presume all has worked out in a most 'sumptuous' way.

Take care,

Michael