Comments : A Lover's Delusion

  • 11 years ago

    by TheDarkCloudBehindthePoet

    All I can say is wow. I never heard anything like this. A person who has a delusional love. The fact that the she knows that she has created an imaginery lover but is afraid to come to reality really puts me in that seat. Good work.

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    This is so unique, I love it! I've never read a poem who is in love with someone completely made up in their head.

    I've known of girls having a "dream guy"...a list of qualities that he must possess or she doesn't want a thing to do with him.... but not this... it kind of puts you in the mind of someone who may be mentally unstable, who is afraid to love so they created the perfect lover inside them. Schizophrenic love, perhaps? lol

    Overall, I loved this... like I said it's totally original. :)

    • 11 years ago

      by Rusheena

      Lol. Thanks, Hannah and nice interpretation because you're pretty much spot on. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Nice work, I loved it. Keep penning.

  • 10 years ago

    by Alaskan Husky

    Mentally unstable is putting it mildly. This girl seems so familiar. Good job. You keep blowing my mind