Comments : I Just Keep My Distance

  • 9 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    A sad and lonely poem. Written with the heart of emotion. Excellent

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yeah that ending just sums it all up on how two people want to love the other but has not the courage to speak it out or approach that person to spill what their heart wishes.

    It's a lonely feeling which I'm sure everyone of us have experienced it..thanks for the read :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    You already know how I feel about your poetry William..No one does a rhymer like you. I love the story this told and feel as if I was watching the whole poem take place. It flowed along beautifully. And this is my fav stanza, if found it incredibly sad.

    I desire to sit beside her,
    To try my key at her hearts door,
    But I just keep my distance,
    While she sits beside the shore.

    So nice to see you penning :) once again.

  • 9 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    This is beautiful , the simplicity in this piece
    Pushs raw emotions through the words and into hearts
    I loved how you kept it all based on the ocean ,
    This is a prime example of how simple Poerty works
    Wonders ,

    Well done indeed

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    ...for some its a reality and for others its life to sit from a distance and watch.