Comments : Idle Away. [Senryu]

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Great poem Natasha! it's a mixture of sad and dark thoughts. I think you better change the title to senryu since haiku is mostly related to nature. I loved the message behind the poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Ahmad Shadab

    Insomuch that I am alone my shadow leaves me alone too

  • 11 years ago

    by Ahmad Shadab

    Insomuch that I am alone my shadow leaves me alone too