I think you did a wonderful job here, Jenn, for it totally fits with the prompt.

Loved the ending as well!

This paints such a gorgeous picture! Heaven can look so different to different people. When I was a kid, the church my Grandma went to had a HUGE mural on the entire back of their wall, and it was pastel rainbows and huge, billowing clouds. It was such a beautiful image, so that's something I instantly see in my head. AH I love this poem!