"To one's eyes, he's tireless
But I see this man's guile"
^I think both of them have the same syllable count - 6 syllables.

"Man I seen roving through the street"
^Man [I've] seen roving through the street

Other than that, I think you did great, hmmm, another form ha, well done. Looking forward to read another form from you!

Nonets are a difficult form because you are so limited, and when you get to the "meat" of the poem, it's usually the smallest part - like here.

I thought this was really interesting. I could see a lonely, tired man walking, looking for something but never finding anything. Brought me a very sad image!

A mature piece and speaks volumes. I love it that you lived to the form and presented your message aptly!
Keep penning:)