My eyes!!!! my eyes!!!

That is me corrupted.

I am not a bi sexual woman or a lesbian lady last time I checked.....

er........I am actually a little gobsmacked..
(and I have a huge gob to smack)

I love the passion in this Robert, you have your own niche and you write enthusiastically.
I am sure this is going to be enjoyed by many.
well crafted, well done.

I'm not either....I like guys....but dame...I'm speechless.....you know how to Wright....that's all I can say....wow..

I'm not either....I like guys....but dame...I'm speechless.....you know how to Wright....that's all I can say....wow..

Wow... Just wow... I'm bi and what you wrote here blew my mind. If I had this lover you spoke of, my intimate life would be perfect. Excellent job

Well, Robert, in Dutch we would call this "porna", as opposed to porn. It means that you have written a piece that women love, because it has good taste and is not just about "the act".

I found it exiting, and well written, especially since you are not a woman yourself!

Good work,

5/5 Ingrid

Passionate and lovely! Loved it!!!:)

Wow i will become bi for some of this. curious how this feels.

:o

Lol

I commend you for writing without worrying about what others think...I admire this about you. I felt it was more a sexy story than a poem though Robert. Too many times I have stopped my pen mid-write because of what another poet may think.

Spicey spicey..almost too hot

Wow!!!! What a poem Robert! It blew my socks off!
So very erotic, left me feeling just a little dizzy with excitement. (won't say no more here!)
A great write, truly..

Oh my lord. That was fantastic. I only wish I wasn't at work when I read it! haha Just a quick note.... I think you should use a thesaurus when writing poems. It may help. I found that you replicated words so many times it got "boring" in a sense of literary technique. But just WOW 5/5

I found this very erotic and sensual..... a teasing, pleasing write!

... and it took me too a place I've never been before... :)

Well written I must say.

I loved this so much, all I could think about was my girlfriend while reading this. You have a talent with your words and details, keep it up!

WOW!
so much like my first lesbian time...
I thought this was more a story than poem, but i loved it all the same.