Wow

great flow and rhyming, deep imagery, great piece of story telling poetry.

nominated

Amazing great write!

Very good!!! you have inspired me

What a way to introduce yourself to the site. To be honest I was browsing through the nominated poems this week and was bored. A terrible week this week for nominations, partly because it appears that love and friendship category's are still having problems and partly because PnQ has seemed a bit quiet this week.
So thank God for Leanthil, this poem is a rose among 'angst ridden rambles' (Britt's aside)
This poem has a structure, it rhymes really well and is unforced, the imagery and attention to detail is really well crafted, In fact the first stanza is one of the best examples of an opening stanza I have read for a few weeks.
Welcome to the site Leanthil, you write really well.