Comments : Purpose of Creating Hands [Tanka]

  • 11 years ago

    by Darren

    Great tanka Khalid and a clever subject, we can not only do so much, we can say so much with our hands. I think you make this point very well.

  • 11 years ago

    by Rusheena

    Beautiful and well said, but so are all of your tankas ;)

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    Hmm, really gets the reader thinking about the sins and obedient things they have done. I actually looked at my hands after this.
    First thing to pop into my head for obedience was a man working, a person holding a child, someone off at war
    Sins: someone off at war.. Doing as told yet taking lives.

    I love it

  • 11 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Nice tanka Khalid...please count syllables in line 4 I count 8...but nice message as well.

  • 11 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Gud one khalid.