Comments : First breath (Haiku)

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Great haiku! I like the nice simile between new-born human and drop of tear resembling the dew. Excellent!

  • 11 years ago

    by Rusheena

    This is beautiful, Mohan. It's nice to see the word "tear" be used in good context for a change. That truly is one of the most beautiful moments in life.

  • 10 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    This is really sweet :)