I definitely felt euphoric after reading this! I loved each and every line, I mean from the "paper storm" to "raspberry hideaways" to the "emerald" and "eternal rosy moon"... I felt wrapped up in this imagery! What a filling write with such vivid words that paint a whole scene of peace and passion. I also liked how you spoke of the sunset so gingerly calming you & lounging within your soul. It makes me wish I took photographs of the sunsets every day, but sometimes I do go outside and it's amazing how you can just stop and stare at it. Beautiful! :]
7 years ago
by Tara Kay
This was such a melodic write here, and the tone was just gorgeous throughout...the imagery was fantastic, creating a scene in my mind that made me smile.
This was such a beautiful and pretty write, it really made my heart sing and dance
7 years ago
by Marcy Lewis
Holy imagery explosion.
I've been sitting here staring at this trying to figure out a comment. In a literal sense, every single line is mesmerizing in detail. Even the short ones. This almost isn't even poetry. It's nearly a visual art! What a gorgeous image this piece provokes. I wish there were a way to take a picture of the thoughts this poem brings.
"I become passionate
within a paper storm
of lazy raindrops
and raspberry hideaways."
^I read that stanza, and literally my jaw dropped. This is such a beautiful write. Any adjectives I try to come up with will not do it justice.
I really can't even speak about it, so I'm definitely nominating this for ridiculously amazing imagery.
Oh my stars! Andrea, this is perfect! I'm so glad that this was the first poem I read today because because it really does make you feel euphoric when you're reading it.
This poem oozes vivid imagery, and I love your choice of words. The metaphors and images work together really well to create a fantasy; I felt like I was watching anime or animation with amazing cinematography, lol.
You knocked it out of the park, as always, but this one really stands out to me. 5/5, favorited, nominated, the whole nine yards. You deserve it. Great write :)
7 years ago
by Wild Flower
Your tone here shows your mood when you were writing it. The words choice and imagery are so great, it appeals to anyone who reads it.
You never fail in creating a new nature master piece.
The title sounds like a name of a perfume and considering this is a nature's poem I found that to be a very smart choice.
The choice of word and the metaphors were spot on. You used a number of elements of nature to give the piece a realistic look and feel. There tone you used all throughout the poem was very soft and tender and poetic at the same time. I love the images you draw, the place looks and sounds magical.