Simple yet it speaks volumes. I love haikus because they only give you room to include the important details, and you do this very well. Nice work.

I love the description of this poem
the choice of language is brilliant
and this haiku is brilliant

keep up the good work 5/5

I love the description of this poem
the choice of language is brilliant
and this haiku is brilliant

keep up the good work 5/5

Winter night ended
the red sun kisses this world

^^A nice image here where winter is over and
a new day is rising with a red sun. I also like
how you have used the word "kiss" here for the red sun is big and it does look like it is kissing the world. In fact I awoke to a red sun this morning and it was a lovely sight..just like this image!

flowers soon wake up

^^The sign of Spring awakes in flowers first as they stretch out and reach for the rays. A nice Haiku :)

Beautiful Haiku! Short but deep in meaning.

Haikus is short for "people who cant finish a poem"

Onethuscome...I checked out your account and found you have never attempted a haiku so if that's all you have to say about this form then.....it's probably best you didn't comment at all?

Winter night ended
the red sun kisses this world
flowers soon wake up

Ok I love the picture you have painted in my mind with your first two lines here but...I can't remember what it's called now but your third line should make a different statement..relating to the first two...Mmm...wish I could remember but...my suggestion is this...

When winter night ends
with red sun kissing the world:
in the morn, flowers.

I think there's supposed to be an element of surprise in the third line?

Just my thoughts...

Your haikus are so lively....great write!

This is a really lovely haiku! I love haikus!

Regarding Hellon's comment, her suggestion is really good too, except that I wouldn't change anything about this haiku. I think it is awesome as it is. The element of surprise is there on the third line.