Maggie

by Cody Prosser   Mar 23, 2013


You have the beauty of Venus

And the brains of Athena

Can I be your Adonis, will you be my promised?

Will you be mine? 'Cause i need you, honest!

I have the anger of Ares when he's pissed,

But also the love and affection of Eros when he's kissed.

I really hope this message never gets missed

From the girl i'm trying to get on the top of my list.

I am a fool hopelessly in love with you, YOU! With the black hair and brown eyes!

Every time I talk to, walk to you, and even pass by you, my heart just sighs.

I want you, I need you, but yet I never get the chance to you mine,

I feel like I'd cross the line

But then again, I'll never know unless I try...

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  • 12 years ago

    by Daylight Lucidity

    This is a great poem, however, there is one thing you missed in one of the last lines.

    I want you, I need you, but yet I never get the chance to you mine,

    ^^^ I think you forgot the "make" in between "to" and "you." Other than that, I really enjoyed this and the use of the gods. :) nicely penned 5/5