Noooo! why do you do this to me?? You cannot put something like this into a small form and give us no ending lol. It is like little cliff hangers that sum up the film but you cannot wait to see the film!

I love the eerie tone here, very fitted to darkness indeed. Great description of falling for something you know is no good for you but you go into it anyway. Wow. Very nicely done!

Ohhhhhh I LOVE this! You didn't need a lot of superfluous language to convey a strong image, and it was just BEAUTIFUL.

I loved this, actually I love the form, still trying to pen my own piece with enough oomph to get the point across but you did it brilliantly Rusheena,

and I love that you've used the inspiration to create such a dark write, but its great to leave it wide open for us to interpret and decide the ending.

Really awesome write, girl...lovely :)

I like how you noticed the evil. yet you like it . because evil is deep inside you . I too wish it was a bit longer. but that's what makes a story\poem great.

Love the rhyming lol i SERIOUSLY think this pretty much sums up my ex ex that i had lol i won't say any alarming about him but ummm i had this feeling when i was with him i KNEW he'd destroy me but i didn't care hell this poem is like a second skin and i can feel the emotions and the layers of this poem! :) great job girl! :")

Queen Ashlin

Eh you know what happens when you fall in love you say darn the problems lol