Comments : Princess of the Moon

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    The serenity, the imagery, the flow, the ambiance.... crisp and clear to the T!!!

    Keep writing more..... I really missed your writes!

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Well hello graceful poetry...this was beautiful Yakori!

    Your wording is breathtaking, I adore the visual, and I got so lost in the story , truly captivated.

    Loved the title, so unique, and had me questioning what type of nature poem this would even be.

    Very nicely done.

  • 10 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I even love the way you formatted this beautiful poem of natural beauty

  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    Damsels worship my mystic beauty
    upholding their springy feminity.

    ^ that part I loved in this beautiful couplet it's really amazing it's captivating...it's beautiful from the way it flows and at times rhymes really beautiful 5/5