First off good job with the quatern and I enjoyed the read :) Secondly I just feel that there are too many commas which makes the sentence stop but other then that it is always nice to see a guy feel so passionately about a woman..take care.

Another very praise worthy poem Robert.
You truly know how to use words to great effect.
A lovely piece!

I am lost within the magic of your poem and how you write!

Love this piece a lot..... it is so loving and gives a warm feeling. Thankyou for penning this lovely write for us!