Comments : Lost, Within, The Magic, Of You... (Quatern)

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    First off good job with the quatern and I enjoyed the read :) Secondly I just feel that there are too many commas which makes the sentence stop but other then that it is always nice to see a guy feel so passionately about a woman..take care.

  • 11 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Another very praise worthy poem Robert.
    You truly know how to use words to great effect.
    A lovely piece!

  • 11 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    I am lost within the magic of your poem and how you write!

    Love this piece a lot..... it is so loving and gives a warm feeling. Thankyou for penning this lovely write for us!