Completely fits all girls... love iteven more than the last.. amazing kips!

I like this and its so true and thanks kips :)

You made the wrong assumption
By thinking you needed attention;
Lo, what you need is self-respect,
And until you get that straight,
Darling, you can do without a guy.

^^
So true!

Do you have any sisters, Kips? You for sure would have made an excellent older brother:)

Great poem to empower women.

Well done, son

5/5 Ingrid

This is such a sweet one! Girls, and guys alike, have probably needed to hear these uplifting words sometime in their life. Very sincere, inspirational poem. Going in my faves, in case I need to read it one of these days. :P

Kips, this is fabulous! I've never read a poem by guy who feels for a girl. I wish I see more guys who are like you. Shedding away that worthless ego and giving his girl the attention and love she needs!
Way too awesome!!!:)
Keep writing:)

Very unique, makes me think of so many people I know haha. 5/5

mandy

Wonderful, it's a nice change to find a guy that has a girls feelings at heart. Nicely written, I like it :)

Nice Work Kips!!!