For theres a feeling deep inside us
A sharpened blade that we call hope
Breaking all the doors that we must
To walk on down that road
Can I make it till the end of time
Just to hold you very close
I hope that we will eventually see
The place where we must go

^ This is one of my favorite parts

I think it should be "there's" instead of theres

In my opinion, the ending needs a bit more of work. A little bit of punch to make it stanza more.

That place is right next to me, and ill hold you up
when you're alone

^^This is the ending,

I would suggest a "where" instead of "and"

like this:

That place is right next to me, where I'll hold you up
when you're alone

or

That place is right next to me, where I'll hold you up
whenever you feel alone.

P.S ... Only the author knows what is best for their pieces so feel free to ignore my suggestions.

I blame the double and triple post on bad connection.

This poem is very encouraging, I really enjoyed reading it, fabulous job!!!