Excellent Work!!!

A lovely sad piece Rebecca!
I have missed your writing.
I love these type of poems and you excell at them!
Nice work!

I love this poem. It flows pretty decently and has a nice meaning to it. [:

What matters to one, he keeps close. Where offence is found, Love is bound. Indeed beautifully worded..

Fabulous.. I like the sadness in this piece and the love which was reflected in the end.
Wonderful:):)
Keep writing^^

This is a story of a woman that bleeds for love..Love with a big L. I hope he is worth it, hunni.

Well done on releasing your emotions on paper,

5/5 Ingrid