Comments : One Child

  • 11 years ago

    by Karla

    So sad. How many children dream about a brilliant life!But not so many are privileged.Good job!Keep writing!

  • 11 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Food was the only real comfort...
    But even then...

    Even a sad poem can have build in funny bits, and I love the contract between sadness and lightness