Comments : Wired

  • 10 years ago

    by Mimed Lovette

    I get this sense of sadness and and passive anger from this poem. I liked how you used the phrase "seething being" to project your inner feelings.

    "I'm not cut from the same cloth;"
    I particularly enjoyed this sentence, it gives a very literal and metaphorical sense of meaning which I liked a lot.

    From the poem, I thought it was excellent that you personified seasons to characteristics, such as Autumn to someone likeable, or someone we enjoy being around with while Winter gave me the idea that you feel unwanted, numb and cold. I can tell that this poem might carry a heavy meaning in your life and the direct speech you used allowed us to properly hear what you wanted to say. Thumbs up and keep your chin up hun :)

  • 10 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    This is so beautiful written, full of depths of your soul and darkness! I really loved the way it flowed and especailly the way you described your emotion, picture perfect!!!