Comments : Silence

  • 11 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    I LOVE this form and poem by you Raj! ... One can feel the silence.

    Very Well Done :))

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    their plastic

    ^^I like how you have used the words plastic concerns for it relates to artificial feelings and emotions..nice one.

    and I
    seem to have moved on,
    that's when emptiness creeps
    in, while Silence slowly frowns.

    ^^This part really shows the writer's feelings and the relationships that has been removed from one's life creates an emptiness and a silence that turns cold..very nicely penned.