Comments : Jumping Dream's

  • 6 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    You have a great imagination!... And your poem just kept me immersed until the end!

    Very entertaining write that gave a smile :)

    Keep penning 'em Robert! :D

  • 6 years ago

    by L

    Quiet a dream!

    I like the use of pinnocchio and the whale that made smile.

  • 6 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    I love this, I wish I had this kind of imagination, I would never be searching for ideas, wonderful poem, I loved reading it!!!