Comments : Aimed, but I hold the fire.

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    First off, I adore the title, I think the poem is has nice flow and wonderful structure and a great poem!

  • 11 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    Wow, this is a seriously deep piece.
    I really don't even know what to say about this, exactly. Just wow. I think you describe what a lot of people feel or think about.

    Great choice of words, lovely.

  • 11 years ago

    by NobodyKnowsItButMe

    Life indeed is precious...so don't ever let ur misery swallow it! :) nice poem, Nat...! :) u've got the talent...!

  • 11 years ago

    by NobodyKnowsItButMe

    Life indeed is precious...so don't ever let ur misery swallow it! :) nice poem, Nat...! :) u've got the talent...!