It have being a while since my last poem... needed this.

I like it.

I like the emotion in the piece. It is emotional and deep and it is rather easy to relate to.

I love the rhyme as well. I am a sucker for rhyming poems that have a deeper meaning behind it.
A lot of the time rhyme adds a comical sense but yours has a very... deep and sophisticated appeal to it. Nicely done.

It flows pretty well and enjoyable :)